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Please, please, just do as you please.
Just please don't hurt, don't lie, don't tease.
I want you here, to be with me.
So please, just stay. Just stay here, please.
Forever will I wait if you ever leave,
but if you do, come back to me, please.
I can't stand life without you near.
So please, oh, please, just stay right here.
©2008-2009 ~shadowgeist
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Idk.
I felt like writing a poem
so I did.

Another one of my poems that really has nothing to do with my life.
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Aww sounds sweet and sad...a melody of desperation and passion.

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~When one doesn't know who, where, or why they are, they must close their eyes and see not with their mind but with their heart.~
Yeah! lol thanks :)

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:ninjaplot::spork::D
I know this pretty rave girl...
Anytime^^

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~When one doesn't know who, where, or why they are, they must close their eyes and see not with their mind but with their heart.~
love it. reminds me of my life. lol. but only sometimes!! ah-mazing!

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*~*Ashlee Kayann*~*
lol thanks.
:)

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:ninjaplot::spork::D
I know this pretty rave girl...
I think this could really be developed into a song!

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haha really??

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I know this pretty rave girl...
totaly! Totally! Unfortunately I’ve never been very good at putting music to things, but with your rhyme scheme and structure, I think your poem could be a refrain.

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(thinks he's too cool for a signature)
Oooh! Neatness.

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I know this pretty rave girl...

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